如何写2018年6月30托福考试作文题目到满分?

2025-11-13 16:58:29

1、第一 步:

这道题目是强化班的例题题目,是重复了2015年4月18日的题目。 

在2018年的托福考试真题中 已经重复了3次历史托福题目。

第二步 :解题过程:

立场(主旨):(B)Focusing on and trying to achieve realistic goals  but not (A)pursuing ambitious dreams .

策略:我们曾讲过,这种考题属于假大空类型,问题很大、比较抽象;破解的核心在于具体化理由的分支。

理由(分论点):

1. 学习方面, realistic goals rather than ambitious ones ,更能获得持续的学习动力; (eternal motivation of academic  study in school )

2. 生活方面,  realistic goals rather than ambitious ones ,更好地享受生活; (realize the hopes of intimate relation within a family )

3. 身体方面:realistic goals rather than ambitious ones ,更好地; 获得身体健康(enjoy fitness more  )

第三步 : 托福满分范文:

首段: The word “ambitious” for a young adult means,for example, he has a strong desire to be successful in his career life and be   powerful in his social life . And this word is always given a flattering and compliment sense.However , a positive word can not always be applied well in all the settings. To be specific, in most cases, a more practical way-holding and pursuing  a realistic plan is more acceptable. 


4. 主体段1:First , for a young man in school , realistic goals rather than ambitious ones can accommodate eternal motivation of academic  study. As it may be known to all,deep motivation for study drives a student to pursue his academic without much complain of tiredness and dullness. And following the practical goal for a student offers such deep motivation;a typical case for a science major who is skilled in the relevant courses,a great sense of achievement with its consequent arousement after taking the favourate biology courses and exams ,  can examplify  this.The things will be totally different, if he forces himsefl to choose a ambitious strategy-to attend some art courses which he really hate.    


错误思路展示:

用理由去回应理由 ,只会让题目更抽象不好写 ,容易陷入到 如下困境: 

1 很难找到论证素材; 

2道理说明道理 会很假大空!不是得托福写作满分、高分的典型写法。

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